Saturday, November 5, 2011

Quiz 11-5-11

The childhood memory that left a certain impression was when i was like when my dad and his ex wife got a divorce. They had stayed together for like 8 years before actually deciding to get married. Once they did get married they stayed as a married couple for a year. Then they sudenly divorced. It made me realize that not all things about life can be fair. I thought my dad would finish up with a happy life with her and it wasn't the fairytale i thought it would. That is what i learned about life and that it can't always be happy all the time.

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  1. i wouuld change the feeling and add more of emtion. Make it more comming from feelings. I would say the names of people and use more transitions. Make it into more of a series of events other then just throwing things out there.

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