WP1

Cover letter

        On my portfolio assesment I had plenty of strengths and weaknesses. By looking at my writting i had a lot of weaknesses on grammer and organizing the central idea. My strengths was when i let my mind just talk for itself and expressing more of my ideas. By seeing that i need to focus more and get into more detail on what im talking about. On my portfolio i need to figure out more on grammer and using more transitions. I believe the grade i overall earn on my portfolio is a A minus or a B plus for keeping in the range of not getting sny C's on my writting. What i have learned about writting is that it doesn't have to be just plain boring and about boring stuff. It can connect with real life too and can be more creative. For developing more writting abilities i will work more on things with prewritting and planning out my ideas and organizing them. Thats what i believe my portfoilio as a whole is about and earned as a grade.

quiz 12-10-11

Some spacific weaknesses and strengths in my writting can very. When it comes to  not starting the sentence with the same word im very weak on it and cant think of any other way to start a sentence. Comming to having good ideas to talk about and lots of new info im really good at keeping that going and do well at it. The grade i believe i earned was a B average and it probly has to do most with of how i put my essays together and stuff. Thats what i believe i earned on this essay.

quiz 12-3-11

The four teens died because Tyson baxter. It was there fault for choosing to get in the car with him though. Thats basically everyones fault for putting themself in that part. The driver was a big part of it but society had part of it because many people do stuff that they shouldnt be doing. They just see it as a cool thing they want to do by doing something they shouldnt do. Many advertisments and movies, and tv shows that bring people to that. Thats how it could have been societies fault.

quiz11-19-11

Things that make me get through the day of school are knowing im going to see my friends, food, and humor throughout the day. When i get to school i go and see all my friends and cousins. If they werent there i would feel horrible and likey to just want to go home. Another is my boyfriend, i look foward to seeing him everyday and it makes me get more excited to learn in a way. Another is to eat, when its lunch i go and get food and then my friends always make me laugh if they didnt i would be very mad and angry when it comes to hanging out with them.

quiz 11-12-11

Paparazzi do not have the right to follow every famous persons move. They should not be there catching every shot unless maybe asking first. That famous person may not be having a good day that day and it affects a lot to go out to the public and cause issues. Now if the poparazzi were to ask then it could solve problems and maybe even the famous person could give a few poses. Snapping photos they wouldnt want is not fair and shouldn't be allowed.

State Fair

The state fair is a great place to visit. When you arrive there you say lights, roller coasters, fans wheels, clowns, and people. The noises surrounded by screaming, singing, talking, laughing and all mixed around. When walking you suddlenly get that smell of food.